Wednesday, November 10, 2010

a quill working its way

the ink on
a paper
is emotion

the fire in
the stove
is living

the hate in
your heart
is love

the tip on
a pen
is power






© Rajat Mahajan. 2010

6 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

nice, tip of the pen is indeed mighty.

aditya said...

the fire in
the stove
is living

is a great poem .. almost left off in the half just at the right moment.

Mayank said...

very precise

ecstatic shimmeR said...

@Blasphemous Aesthete
sure it is. for me, its the point of highest concentration of energy.

@aditya
i thought of how destruction could be creation simultaneously while writing this and i guess that is the reason that it fell right just the correct amount.

@Mayank
its new for me to have a comment 'precise' for poetry. but thanks :)

kirti mahajan said...

very true !!!

ecstatic shimmeR said...

@kirti
thanks for dropping by :)